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安通名师指导08年成人高考英语作文写作技巧

2011-5-7来源:我要评论()
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  08年成考已经进入备考阶段,若何进修英语是成考学生一夜困扰,为此北京安通黉舍的朱教员来给巨匠以下忠言:

   一、好好使用好成考英语纲要复习  筹备加入成人高考的考生复习备考,首先要当真研读成人高考英语考纲。成人高考英语考纲是指教育部公布的《全国各类成人高档黉舍招生复习考试纲要》。该考试纲要除了对成人英语高考给出必考内容和规模,对各类必考题型作出诠释以外,还给出了基本英语语法常识考点,附上了成人高考英语科考试的全数必考词汇,全数必考短语。成人高考考纲也是成人英语高考命题的首要依据,我在安通黉舍讲英语也是以《考试纲要》为依据。  
  二、复习备考之窍门点拨  考生要想在成考中取得好成就,必需在多做操练题,同时多看英文书报,这样提高词汇量。过程做题,可以体味到写作者的思绪,并体味出题人的思绪。需要提醒考生的是,在做题的过程中,若是发现自己的中心与问题中心不符,这时考生就不要坚定地坚持自己的理解,要调整自己的思绪。安通黉舍的内部课本是我按照以往成考英语考试拟定,针对性很强,巨匠必然要当真做一边,碰着不会的问题用笔标出来,当讲到这题的时辰就要注重听了
  下面我首要讲讲成考英语写作技巧
  首先,记叙文写作的六要素
  我们要让学生进修记叙文写作的六要素——人物、事务、时刻、地址、原因和功效,在记叙文写作时要把六要素交待清楚。让学生进修、把握记叙文的中心和材料的关系,学会从具体的材料中提炼中心,并按照中心思惟的需要选择材料,合理放置情节。学生进修记叙文写作的挨次要求,学会正确使用叙事的三种体例:顺叙、倒叙和插叙。在写作中能按照中心思惟的需要确定详略,分清主次。学会运用第一人称和第三人称进行写作。让学生体味记叙文记人、叙事、写景、状物要切确、活跃、真实的要求,学会运用多种表达体例。  
  其次,把阅读教学与写作指导连系起来进行练习,连系记叙文的阅读教学,过程仿写、改写等手段,使学生的读与写贯通贯通。阅读记叙文,重在对记叙文写法的剖析、阐述;学写记叙文,重在对记叙文常识运用的指导、点拨。
  第三,教学生若何确定写作中心。按照这个中心,思虑或许扩展的材料有哪些,要避免写那些与中心内容无关的细节。环绕中心,列出写作提纲。提纲必然要包含所供给的情景要点,同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词语与句型将其扩展成篇。扩展时要注重写作要求的字数,防止因为字数不够而引起的扣分。从三个方面来剖析记叙文的写作练习  
  (—)论说的人称:  
 (1)第一人称论说(First—person narrator):写作者以当事人的口吻,即第一人称来论说,把文章中的工作以“我”的所见所闻来告诉读者,用主雅的默示手法,给读者一种亲热自然的感受,如同乡自履历一样,增强了事务的可托性,直接抒爆发者的思惟激情,从而引起读者的共识。  
 (2)第三人称论说(Third—person narrator):写作者从傍雅者的角度来论说事务,以客雅的写作体例,或许充实反映事务中巨匠的感染及看法,以全知的视角来论说。  
 (二)论说的内容:  
  一篇记叙文应注重交接清楚工作的始末及细节,即何时、何地、何事、何人及何因(when,where,what,who and why/how),做到有条有理,使读者易于夜白。  
  1.事务:为了引起读者的注重,可以从一些纠缠或交叉事务中睁开,直到高涨呈现,再将问题解决。  2.人物:集中首要人物的描写,记叙人物碰着的工作及人物有什么影响。  
 3.时态:一般多采用一般曩昔时。  
 (三)论说的体例:  
  一般论说的线索可分为以下几种:  
 (1)以时刻为线索,按时刻的挨次来睁开。  
 (2)以地址为线索,以地址的转移为挨次来睁开。  
 (3)以事务成长的过程为线索,或以人物呈现的先后顺序来睁开。  
 (4)以事物的象征意义为线索来睁开。  
 (5)以人物的思惟行为及认知的过程为线索来睁开。  英语论说文的写作,夜多有具体要点(即论点或论据)的限制,所以并不需要若何地纵横捭阖,若何地引经据典。可是,麻雀虽小,五脏俱全,一篇100来字的论说文,同样必需逻辑严密,结构清楚,说话洗练,必需论有中心,言而有据。

  以下从篇章结构、句子修辞和词汇运用等三个方面来谈一谈写好一篇小论说文的根基体例和技巧。
  一、篇章结构  
 (一)先有端方,然后才能从心所欲,不逾矩 
  论说文的写作,住往从正反两方面来阐述,且都有其商定俗成的群情模式,即从“主题句一正面阐述,后背阐述一结论”四夜块去营造文章的根基结构(四块论)。例如,某问题要求阐述“黉舍划定‘课间学生只能呆在自己的教室里’对吗?”这一话题。若是作者认为黉舍的划定错误,他就应该在文章第一块(段)亮出自己的雅点:There is currently much discussion about whether students should stay in their own classrooms or not during break times.Personally I believe that—。而第二块应该从正面阐述“课间不及只呆在自己的教室里”的理由。好比可以说:I would argue that break times are our only opportunity to choose what we want to do. 第三块则从后背雅点,即“课间只能呆在自己的教室里”出发,褒贬对方雅点或进一步阐述己方雅点。例如可以说:Another reason why people say that students have to stay in their own classes at break times is that it would be difficult to organize dinners.最后一块(段)则用分歧的说话再次强调已方雅点。乍一看去,论说文“四块论”仿佛有“滥调文”的嫌疑,但“四块论”合适人的认知纪律,所以值得多多模拟和操练。  
 (二)环绕中心阐述,确保阐述的内容直接为主题处事  
  在上例中,“学生课间时不及只呆在自己的教室里”是主题句,阐述时应该紧紧环绕它。有的同窗在写的时辰先说“学生若课间被许可到其他班级勾当,就可以交到更多的伴侣”,然后又说“交到更多伴侣就可以学到更多常识”,“学到更多常识就可觉得社会做出更夜的进献”……这种阐述体例貌似环环相扣,继往开来,实则是中心涣散的流水账,说到最后,不仅读者会一头雾水,连作者自己城市忘了自己在说什么。  
 (三)确立并写好论点,并将其置于每一段的段首  
  整篇文章有整篇文章的中心论点,每一段落有每一段落的分论点。拔取论点时要问一问自己:这一论点是否会让自己信服?若是—个论点连自己都说服不了,就要抛却它。段落论点的呈现不及羞羞答答,犹报琵琶半遮面,也不及深藏不露,让读者去总结和归纳,而必需在文章开篇或段落开首就亮出来。论点置于篇首或段首,才能纲举目张,也是确保不跑题的前提。以下两个例子中,第一个结构松散,群龙无首,令读者不知所云;而第二个例子则中心凸起,章法严谨。请看:  
  1.Firstly,it is very convenient in daily life.There are many shops and supermarkets in a city.I can buy everything I need easily in these places.When I am sick,I can easily see a doctor in any clinic or hospital.Transport services are good in a city.when I want to go somewhere,I can take a bus,a train or something else.There are also many kinds of entertainment in a city.Public buildings(such as libraries)and parks can easity be found in a city,too.   2.First.it is convenient and comfortable to live in a city.To begin with,there is good housing in a city,as all the houses and flats are well-equipped with good facilities and surrounded by modern amenities such as places of entertainment,public libraries and parks.  而中心句的写法也有讲究。中心句必需能高度综合地址段落的论据,它的关头词应该在每—个论据中都有一再或恰当浮现。那种无关痛痒的论说或声名性的句子,是不适宜用作中心句的。例如:  
  1.Students always feel relaxed and happy during breaks.(论说性句子) 
  2.Break times are scheduled for about 10 minutes.(声名性句子)  
 以下即是阐述“黉舍划定‘课间学生只能呆在自己的班级里’对吗?”的一篇学生习作:Although some people believe that students should stay in their own classrooms during break times,I would like to argue that we should be allowed to spend break times in another class. The most important reason for believing that is that many students have friends in other classes.We spend all day in our own classroom,and break times are the only time we have to spend with other friends.It can become very tedious(令人厌倦的)to have to spend even more time with the same people. A further reason for allowing student to choose where they spend their break times is that it would stop arguements.If students are forced to spend time with classmates who are not good friends,they can annoy each other.This leads to problems that have to be sorted out by teachers. Teachers argue that we all should stay in our own classes,because it is then easier to know what is going on.They say that it is difficult to keep track of students when they are walking round the corridors.However,students could be given the chance to choose a different classroom to spend the whole break time in.That would mean that there would not be any students in the corridors. As I have explained,although it might be a little easier to manage when everyone stays in their own classroom,it would make break times happier for all students if they were allowed to choose where they spent their time.  
 这篇范文合适“四块论”的根基模式,正反阐述兼顾,结构严谨,中心凸起。 

  二、句子修辞  
 (一)应用修辞,增强说服力  恰当采用例如、头韵(即持续数个单词的头音或头字母不异)、夸张等修辞手法,采用诙谐、平行结构等写作手法,可以把事理说得加倍透辟,把雅点表达得加倍光鲜,把平平的内容默示得加倍活跃,从而更好地传递信息,增添文采,激发读者的共识。例如: 
  1.Many people have tried a thousand times before they achieve their goals.(夸张)  
  2.Only a madman would choose to live in a modern city.(夸张)  
  3.Our life would be like soup without salt or flowers without sunlight.(例如)  
  4.The best way is to reduce,reuse and recycle.(头韵)  
  5.For children.the Internet is another way to waste more hours.(诙谐)  
  6.If you want to earn a satisfactory grade in the training program,you must arrive punctually,you must behave courteously,and you must study conscientiously.(平行结构)  值得注重的是,例如等修辞格的使用及谚语等的引用关乎作者对英语文化的理解,因为它们在英语中的意义往往与我们的理解迥然不同,很轻易误用。只有多多进修,当真剖析它们的应用情形,使用起来才能锦上添花。若是没有十分的把握,切不成生搬硬套,否则会适得其反。 
 (二)表达到位,才能言之成理凡是。  
  作者对自己阐述的雅点是清楚的,但在将雅点传达给读者时,往往因为用词禁绝确,逻辑欠严密,或因受中国式思维的干扰而令表达不到位,功效使读者如堕五里雾中。作者应站在读者的立场上考虑问题,始终谨记“读者明不夜白”才是判定写作是否成功的最主要尺度。请看以下几个表达不到位的例句及其更正体例。  
  1.They gave me what I need,but not what I want.析:want可译为“想要”。从汉语角度看,整个句子是流利的,但从英语的逻辑上看,want与need的意义极易同化,是以整个句子意义表达不到位,迷糊不清。可以改为:They have given me what I need but not What I often ask for.  
  2.Maybe there are also some disadvantages of living in a city,but I think they are less important.I feel convenient and comfortable.析:句子后半部门的逻辑关系未交接清楚,令人有“前语不搭后语”的感受。可以改为:Theere are surely disadvantages of living in a city,too,but they are less important and tend to be de-emphasized.For the sake of the advantages mentioned above,I prefer to live in a city.  
 3.Different people have different choices.Some people like living in a city and some people like living in a village.析:Choice的寄义十分宽泛,是以与后面的like不相等,应改为:Different people have different likes and dislikes.Some like to live in a city,others like to live in a village.  
  4.The people,the society and so on were quite different from now.析:The people,the society依然不足以让读者完全理解要阐述的话题,可改为:The peopIe,the society and other aspects of life were quite different from now.  
  5.Thieves should be sentenced for what they have done.析:使用sentence难免言过其实,应改为:Thieves should be punished for their wrongdoing. 
 (三)精练洗练,要言不烦说话精练有力。  
  文风清洁利落,是论说文的主要特征之一。应该指出的是,好句子并不以长短论英雄,长句未必不精练,短句未必不哆咳。作者在写作时,只要力争做到“章无冗段,段无冗句,句无冗词”,就可改变当断不竭、牵丝攀藤的现象。  
  1.The Are No Good Reasons Why Boys and Girls Should Not Be Treated Equally.析:此为一问题句,此作者滥用双重否认,从而使句子过长。宜改为:Boys and Girls Should Be Given Equal Treatment.  
  2.For instance,I knew how to communicate with other people and how to look after myself.The most important thing was that I learn to be independent.析:从意义上讲,look after myself与independent关系慎密,可以合在一路。句子可改为:For instance,I knew how to communicate with others and how to look after myself as an independent girl.  
  3.Moreover,as some girls study harder than boys,they may be even superior.析:moreover后若继续用从句,就会干扰读者的思维。可改为:Moreover,some girls are very dilgent.As a result,they may prove superior to ordinary boys.  
  4.What I mean to say is that well-intentioned law-makers sometimes make fools of themselves.析:what从句并未供给新信息,故可删去。句子可改为:Well-intentioned law—makers sometimes make fools of themselves.  

    三、词汇运用 

  (一)多用书面语,少用口头语  相对口头语而言,书面语更能增添文章的厚重感和读者对文章的信赖感。下列每一组句子中,第二句都使用了书面说话,用词加倍规范,因而比前一个句子略胜—筹。    1.We still have the social problems. The same social problems still exist today.  
  2.For me,there is no need for further protection of woodlands. As far as I‘m concerned,further protection of woodlands is not needed.  
  3.With the development of computer technology,commercial information exchange is becoming easier. Computers have greatly influenced business communication. 
  4.Everything has two sides and this problem is quite the same.Everything has two sides and this issue is not an exception.  
 (二)使用毗连词在句子间使用毗连词,能使文章脉络加倍清楚,逻辑关系加倍流利。  
  例如:  
  1.The water was polluted.As a result,the fish died.  
  2.However,others think we should have junk food.  
  3.On the other hand packaging can have many disadvantages.  
  4.Firstly many people die of passive smoking(被动抽烟)and secondly it can aggravate(使……恶化)lung diseases.  相关的毗连词还有:On the contrary,all in all,in short,generally,worse still,on the other hand,in conclusion,as a consequence,hence,also,personally,furthermore,definitely,surely,undoubtedly,obviously,additionally,in addition,moreover,consequently,clearly,besides,as well,likewise,in my opinion,for the sake of,last but not the least,to begin with,firstly(first),etc.  
  良多时辰,一些常用的句式或句子也能承先启后,使相关的信息获得巧妙的过渡和跟尾。例如:The main reason is that… I can‘t agree more. Another thing we can‘t forget is that… There is every reason to believe that… As we all know…  总而言之,一篇好的论说文,老是在结构、逻辑和说话等方面略胜一筹。英文写作是一个学生综合能力的书面浮现,是一个持久复杂的练习过程。是以,培育学生的写作能力不是一蹴而就的,而要在平常就从学生的现实水平出发,有目的、有打算、有要求、有搜检、有反馈地进行,由易至难,循序渐进。只有这样,学生到高时考才能做到厚积薄发,思如泉涌、下笔若有神。

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